Branches swaying: the leaves fall
Spinning, floating down
Like sycamore seeds
Rain drops make dotted lines on
Windows and fireguards
Sigh in the wind.
For some reason, my first comment didn't seem to "stick", so I'll try again!It's nice to see this in print, Adam. Its imagery is strong; "Raindrops make dotted lines" is a great visual. I like it.Alex
Very effective , love the sycamore seeds and dotted lines, and the sigh.
A beautiful poem Adam; do you have a fireguard that sighs? We no longer have one but I remember the one we used to have and I can imagine they do.
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For some reason, my first comment didn't seem to "stick", so I'll try again!
It's nice to see this in print, Adam. Its imagery is strong; "Raindrops make dotted lines" is a great visual. I like it.
Alex
Very effective , love the sycamore seeds and dotted lines, and the sigh.
A beautiful poem Adam; do you have a fireguard that sighs? We no longer have one but I remember the one we used to have and I can imagine they do.
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