| credit Josephine Knudsen |
The days are getting dark,
The fallen leaves cover the park,
The autumn colours are here;
This is the most colourful time of the year.
Hedgehogs and dormice hibernate,
Woodlands and tourist sites
Are in a dormant state.
Autumn makes me feel sleepy.
The dark nights are a bit creepy,
The gales are howling
River rapids flowing
Life in the town slowing
Down.
Autumn puts the garden to bed
And crocuses blossom in the flower bed.
3 comments:
Brilliant title, Adam. I'm not sure which I prefer: "The sleepy season" or "Charred autumn"... They're both great. The imagery in this poem certainly encompasses autumn. A well-paced piece with a solid final couplet.
Alex
Very evocative Adam, you have captured autumn in all its moods
Like " Autumn puts the garden to bed" and the idea of the "dormant state."
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