This is just great! I remember you reading this at the group, and it's nice to be able to see it in print. I love the line "Spits seed into black water". This is just so poetic -- and it was your first attempt at a haiku! I've got a lot to learn! :) Brilliant.
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This is just great! I remember you reading this at the group, and it's nice to be able to see it in print. I love the line "Spits seed into black water". This is just so poetic -- and it was your first attempt at a haiku! I've got a lot to learn! :) Brilliant.
Alex
Thankyou so much Alex! I appreciate that so much, knowing you are into poetry 😊
Such beautiful imagery Irena, I loved this poem
Many thanks 😊
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