There is a
gate beside the church
That’s
crooked, tired and spent.
Its latch
is rusty, squeaky, stiff,
Its hinges
bowed and bent.
It quivers,
wobble, quakes and reels
On wild and
windy days.
It clatters,
bangs and taps a tune;
It rocks
and jolts and sways.
It’s
clobbered, thumped and slammed and banged
By postmen
in a dash.
Its paint
is blistered, peeled and chipped;
It’s scaled
by cunning cats.
It’s
utilised for landing
By the robins,
chats and wrens.
It’s
thought of as a meeting place
For sweethearts,
swains and friends.
On wintry
days, it’s capped with snow;
It shrinks
in summer sun.
It’s
dressed with bunting, jacks and flags
In celebratory
fun.
And when,
one day it rots away,
The villagers
will smile.
They’ll reconstruct
it with their tools,
And then
they’ll build a stile.
3 comments:
Some really nice language in this one, Eliza. Lots of onomatopoeia, plenty of imagery and some alliteration too. It's amazing what you can say about a gate; you are quite the storyteller; your verse envelops the reader, transporting them into the tale. Brilliant.
Alex
Really enjoyed reading this, I can see that gate and hear it ๐
Really enjoyed reading this. I can see the gate and hear it ๐
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