24th JANUARY 2023 at
Peepos
Present: Jennie, Liz, Adam, Sue Irena, Kath,
Andy, Marie (Chair)
Apologies:
Alex, Martyn, Jayne, Stuart, John A-S, Tony Treble, Tony Haynes (a potential member who hopes to join us
soon).
The warming up the creative juices’ activity was to choose from some sentences to start a story. Five minutes was the timeframe and members were given six minutes in total. The timing was short to allow for everyone to read their homework and some other pieces of writing.
Sue: ‘Mary inserted the old video
cassette tape into the player and couldn’t believe what she saw on the
screen………..’ Sue’s memory was about her father, sorting his belongings after he
died. She found an old reel-to-reel tape of her father and remembered him on a
walk and in a farmyard. He was proficient at mimicking the sounds of birds and
animals.
Jennie: ‘Mary inserted the old video cassette
tape into the player and couldn’t believe what she saw on the screen………..’
Jennie described Mary looking back at the video of her wedding day and being
part horrified and part fascinated by the clothes they were all wearing,
including her wedding dress, her mother’s hat and her father’s suit. The piece
was based on memories of Jennie’s father’s taste in clothes.
Kath: ‘Paul looked into the hole where the archaeological
dig was taking place………’ Kath had been reading a
factually based book on the stone age and used that to write a piece about a
dig where beads and bracelets were found at a dig and were made from teeth. Also
a skull.
Andy: ‘Paul looked
into the hole where the archaeological dig was taking place………’ Andy read an exciting piece about a strange
disc shaped object which he had actually identified in an Oxford dig some years
ago. Andy was unable to finish the story however he told us that he identified
it as the vertebrae of a marine creature and is about 180 million years old. He
was there for his geological expertise.
Irena: ‘Daniel awoke with a start, someone
was downstairs…………’ Daniel went downstairs with a walking stick to use on the
intruder, to find his mum there who had left his father in the middle of the
night.
Adam: ‘Paul looked into the hole where the
archaeological dig was taking place……..’ Adam wrote about a long step back in
time with Paul having found a footprint which was from an early primate four
million years ago. Adam based his writing on an episode of Coast where
footprints were found in the Dovey estuary.
Liz: ‘She drew back the curtains and
gasped………….’ Liz wrote about the expected view of terraced houses opposite
having been replaced by wispy shades of blue and floating, coloured boulders.
The viewer thought she may be dreaming, then she opened her front door……… Liz left
the story hanging there so we don’t know
what happened next.
Marie: ‘Jasper jumped onto the dining table
just as the Vicar was going to take a bite of his omelette. Jasper’s owner
hoped to get to him before havoc ensured. She was too late……….’ Marie wrote about a parrot nearly drowning in
the trifle and being washed under a tap. Unfortunately the vicar’s wife was
splattered with trifle.
The homework
was ‘Winter’
Sue wrote a Haiku: A flicker of red / A
robin at my feeder / Brightens winter gloom.
Kath wrote about winter portraying images
of frost. 2022 was the warmest year on record. The river is up, there are mild
temperatures at present. IUT’s chilly not cold and there are buds on trees and
shrubs.
Andy wrote about winter skies which put
on celestial displays and the location of stars and constellations. Andy
described some constellations, the Polaris pole star. Their positions change
during the year. Sirius is the
brightest star.
Irena read a poem she had written about
her memory of growing up in the Yorkshire Dales called, ‘A Moment on Frostrow
Fell.’ It was full of descriptions that we were easily able to imagine.
Jennie read, ‘Those bitter Winters’ which
were the ramblings of Olive, an elderly lady who felt that youth is wasted on
the young. She spoke about Chakras and revealed that today was the anniversary
of a tragedy. Some of Olive’s memories were taken from Jennie’s own life.
Adam wrote about two strangers on a train
during a snowstorm in winter. The train zig-zagged below snow-capped peaks and
a cutting blocked with snow. The female remembered winters in her home in
Quebec. She and the boy started arguing. Eventually they make up and kiss.
Liz read ‘A Broken Silence’ which was a
mixture of her experiences during the past two weeks in Norway, and her
knowledge of Nordic mythology. She set her piece in Midgard when an ancient Nordic
god, Thor, awakens to tackle the challenges humans have brought upon themselves
in January 2023 and his concern that modern humans have lost their faith and
will not know how to face the coming storms they have let loose which could end
the world, Ragnarok, (Armageddon).
Sue read
Jane’s poem about
fingers and toes tingling in winter.
Liz Read
Alex’s Haiku: Hungry,
empty trees / Submit to icy breezes, / Bobbing in ivory.
Kath read a piece ‘I Came, I Thaw, I
Conquered.’ This was based in Iceland, the land of fire and ice with thirty
active volcano systems. One glacier is one kilometre thick in some places.
Kath told us that on February 2nd there
will be a comet currently behind the Plough. It was last closest to the earth
50,000 years ago. The atmosphere around it glows green. Before dawn is the best
time to see it using binoculars.
Martyn sent a sound file however
unfortunately Liz was unable to open it at Peepos, probably due to the poor
WiFi signal.
The next
two meetings are:
Tuesday 7th
February, 7pm at
Peepos. Alex to chair. This is an extra meeting to the schedule. Please let
Alex know if you can attend through hightownwriters@gmail.com Also, a reminder that GDPR legislation states that email addresses are
not to be shared without the owner’s permission.
Tuesday
28th February 7pm Peepos. Chair to be decided. Volunteers welcome for the
position of Chairman and to set writing topics.
Marie Sever

2 comments:
Nice write-up, Marie -- good to be able to read what I missed!
Well, the next meeting on the 7th is a bit thin on the ground at the moment, folks. So, if anyone wants to attend it, please do let me know. However, if you would prefer to attend just monthly, that is fine, not a problem.
Lovely haiku, Sue; I'm assuming it's going up soon -- a very welcome addition to the section.
Alex
Intending to come on the 7th and looking forward to it 🙂
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