My red
terrier, and a moment on Frostrow Fell.
Sting-soft kisses
slide into meltdown
over our faces,
as the sky falls
through steel silence.
Even my terrier waits,
not wiry, or raring to run,
loath to sully whiteout
with our footsteps.
Bent Dali-like
over Frostrow,
snowfall drapes hills
and, hunkering low
across peat-bogs,
smothers reeds, slides
into blackened streams.
We feel invisible,
melting into landscape;
fells terraform inside of me,
as influential as ancestors
in shaping who I am.
Suddenly wild
geese
scissor the
snowfall,
mesmerising, wild, as
their thin song
echoes
my emergent sense
of being.
Many days meld
into subconscious soup:
Not that day.
That day, decades behind,
is a piece of eternity
snatched from heaven,
scooped into linear time:
a fragment of gold in my pocket
to feel and finger secretly,
or pull out and look at
again, and again.
My red terrier credit Irena Szirtes |
4 comments:
This has a stream-of-consciousness feel to it, Irena. Some really lovely language -- I particularly like the "a fragment of gold" metaphor and "wild geese scissor the snowfall". Original.
Alex
Thankyou very much Alex. So glad ypu like the language. I have never considered myself a poem writer, but lately have written quite a few. It's interesting about the stream of consciousness thing...sometimes poems seem better to express certain thoughts.
Whet beautiful use of language Irena. A wonderful comparison is the fragment of gold in your pocket to the captured memory in your mind.
Thankyou so much Jennie 🙂
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