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| credit Adam Rutter |
Behind the station platform
Stands a house
Red-brick home with grey gable
Faces green fields
And the sea
Running through the edge of Llwyngwril
A railway track trails between trees and hedgerows
Leaving a gap from
The redundant platform
On the other side
Covered in grass, briers, bushes
I see platform edge
Between the branches
Grass buries the old rail loop
Pecking on the grass
A goldfinch
3 comments:
Nice descriptive work, Adam. "Track trails between trees" is a great mix of alliteration and assonance. Sound.
Alex
Captures the feel of abandoned railway tracks. This one seems to have made quite an impression on you Adam.
Nice description
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