Monday 16 October 2023

a night and a day in the life of a cat without a cat-flap by Val Pedrick

for Brin 

as autumn nights draw in

our cat, flat, black against

frosted back door, flashes

peridot eyes; pats

pleading paws on glass:

‘Let me, in, niaow, purr-lease!’

 

in bed by eleven,

cat flat between us;

purrs serenade sleep, but

visits to the loo at midnight,

one, and then, two, disturb her:

‘Let me, sleep, niaow, purr-lease!’

 

four a.m. flying cat clatters at

bedside – one of us – is oblivious!

I rise, don slippers and robe;

top of the stairs, puss pauses- for effect,

trots down, another pause, licks paws:

‘Let me, out, niaow, purr-lease!’

 

alarmed at six-thirty for work;

one of us – (me) – is oblivious;

sleepy-head, breakfasts

in bed; worker dresses and

leaves, calls, ‘puss at the door, get up!’

‘Let me, in, niaow, purr-lease!’

 

escorted to kitchen and fed, cat

runs, jumps onto bed, flops flat

for a fuss, quick wash, then snores …

to tackle the chores, I rise, while

velvet paws fold furry face and flat-cat sighs:

‘Let me, sleep, niaow, purr-lease!’

 

worker returns, for croissants and lunch,

cats stirs for her ‘crunch’, selects a spot

in the flat for her post-prandial nap, then

clicks at the carpet, when it’s time to go out;

a flick of the tail, gallop, trit, trot, downstairs:

‘Let me, out, niaow, purr-lease!’

 

in the cat-flat without a cat-flap,

flat-cat pops out and in for drinks

and snacks; a tiny, cold snout nuzzles

our knees, to say ‘ta’ – (“a-a-ah”)

for leaving our flat-door ajar:

‘Let me, in and out, niaow, when I, purr-lease!’ 

4 comments:

Liz said...

I love the play on words throughout this lovely piece of Val's and how she describes so much of everyday life through the filtered focus on the cat. So clever.

Anonymous said...

Very cute! And a very original way of describing the colour of your cat's eyes -- "peridot" (I had to google it!).

I'm surprised you ever managed to get a good night's sleep!

Alex

Ann Reader said...

Love it and as someone who shares a house with a similar cat I recognize it completely

Irena Szirtes said...

It captures the plight of any pet lover (who wouldn't be without them!) And the character of cats!