Manga felt himself begin to tremble but couldn’t tell if it was from the cold or fear. Of course, he had been into the cave before, all the youngsters did from time to time as a dare. He knew it contained bones and that the skeletons of those who had died were taken there after they had been left on the sky platform for the carrion birds to pick them clean. He knew they were nothing to fear.
This was
different though. Tonight, he was going to meet the ancestors. Tonight, he
would become an adult. The elders had given him a ritual cleansing in the
stream that ran below the Ancestor cave. It was a warm day so being submerged
in the cold water was not too bad and only slightly frightening when they held
him under till he was nearly out of breath. It meant however that he was
somewhat damp as he entered the cave. As caves do it became colder as he went
further in.
He was just
beginning to wonder how he would find his way any further it had become so
dark, when he saw a light coming towards him. He continued walking to it as he
had been instructed and was relieved to see it was his grandfather. He caught
the greeting before it left his mouth. He was not to speak to anyone until he
spoke to the ancestors. His grandfather took his hand and gave it a reassuring
squeeze. Manga found he was no longer trembling as he was led further into the
depths of the cave, he was surprised to find he was in fact curious. This was
the furthest he had been into the caves. The light flickered against the walls
and occasionally groups of crystal structures that he would like to have
stopped and investigate further but his grandfather pulled him on.
At last,
after several twists and turn the cave opened out into a wide echoing space
where the elders of the tribe were sat in a circle, surrounded by torches, they
were chanting in a language Manga did not understand.
His
grandfather pushed him into the middle of the circle where the shaman was
holding a cup out to him. This had been explained to him. He knew it was a
drink that would bring him closer to the ancestors but that it would’ve also be
a trial for his body, not everyone survived the meeting. Some the ancestors
chose to join them straight away. Some remembered nothing or almost nothing of
the meeting. Others returned with a message or sometimes even a task.
Manga drank
the drink although if asked he would have to have admitted that the taste was
not pleasant, almost immediately he felt unsteady and lowered himself to the
floor. The chanting seemed to take on another dimension. He had been told he
would be allowed to ask one question. The chant seemed to take on an insistent
quality. ‘Ask, ask, ask’ Manga had thought about this for days without reaching
a conclusion. Should he ask about the future of the tribe, or whether his
family would prosper or what he himself should do to keep the gods happy. ‘Ask
ask, ask’ the chant went on.
“Why am I so
small” it just slipped out, to his huge humiliation. Here he was speaking to
the ancestors, and he had asked such a non-entity of a question. Of course, it
was one that had always bothered him as his younger brothers and even his
younger sister had grown taller than him. He desperately hoped he had not
spoken out loud but with the chanting and the effect of the drink it was
impossible to tell. He would have liked to run away but his legs would not obey
him. He could only wait where he was and hope.
Just as he
felt he might pass out he heard a voice although he could not be sure if it was
not in fact in his head rather than being heard by his ears in the normal way.
‘We have a
task for you. This cave has become too crowded for all the ancestors here. We
need a new cave. It is easier for you who are small to explore the crannies and
fissures in the rocks and find the caves behind them. Also some of our older
ones are smaller, they are now so far
back in this cave, and so crowded they can hardly tell who is who. You are
small enough to get to them and move some of them to less crowded places.
You are
small because we need you to be small. Now you may return and you will remember
what we have said and find us a new cave.”
And so it
was.
8 comments:
Remember how effective this was when you read it at the meeting. I love that your interpretation of themes is developing such original pieces, rather than the obvious 😊
How scary. Such a glass half full resolution. What if he hadn't had a role foreseen for him?! Too grim to think about what loving people, the grandad here, would do to the ones they love for the sake of a belief system. Gripped me when you read this out.
Thank you
Thank you
I loved reading your story Anne after listening to you read it, you’ve created a great atmosphere.
Listening to the BBC version of Under Milk Wood last week, one of the miners in the modern version said it was useful to be small
because he could get to the narrower seams. Maybe I could too!
Yes, a very atmospheric piece; I felt that a good old transferred epithet would have worked well.
I particularly liked "The light flickered against the walls and occasionally groups of crystal structures".
It has a very occult feel to it -- how did you come up with this, Ann? What was your inspiration for it?
Alex
I suppose I have an interest in other cultures and anthropology, I have also read of similar ideas in fiction Jean Auel for example bases her stone age series on anthropological research
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