Sunday, 30 March 2025

Spacebound Hearts: Chapter One: Into The Wormhole by Adam Rutter

credit Gencraft AI

‘Open the wormhole,’ radioed Alex.

The view of the stars through the window inside the cockpit began to stretch and squeeze, forming a ring around a black hole. The Falcon’s engines roared, pushing the spacecraft toward the invisible anomaly. Red and green lights flicked on the consoles.

‘All systems are looking good Falcon,’ a man’s voice said on the headset.

‘Copy that.’

The Falcon started shaking. The black hole’s gravity was pulling the single seated spacecraft into its mouth. Alex’s pressurized suit was equipped with sensors, monitoring his heartbeat. The bleeps grew faster as his heart was beating more rapidly. As the anomaly grew larger, the Falcon fell into the long, winding tunnel. Alex had left planet Novaterra and the Milky Way galaxy behind, travelling on a quick journey to another galaxy that would take a spaceship 163,000 years to get there at the speed of light.

‘Falcon has entered the singularity. I repeat, the Falcon entered the singularity,’ confirmed Alex.

‘We copy that Falcon.’

Blue lights flickered on the console, indicating a build up of radiation inside the anomaly.

‘Falcon, can you give us a progress report,’ a woman requested, voice distorted.

‘Radiation levels are stable. All systems normal.’

Alex was the first human in history to travel beyond the Milky Way 600 years after humankind left its first boot print on the surface of the moon. This was no ordinary journey. It was a scientific experiment. The vast distance between the two galaxies had been cut down, making it look as easy as travelling from Earth to the Moon. Humanity had colonised a quarter of the galaxy. Now, it was looking for a new frontier. To expand human colonies beyond the galactic boundaries.

‘Radiation levels critical,’ said Alex.

The radio buzzed and crackled.

‘I repeat...radiation levels critical.’

The buzzing was loud and persistent.

‘Do you copy?’

The cockpit was filled with flashing red lights. An alarm blared.

‘Do you copy? DO YOU COPY?’

The wormhole swung and slithered like a winding snake, the Falcon hit against the wall at every corner, bouncing along a narrow corridor.

The walls were closing in.

‘Warning,’ announced a computer generated voice. ‘Cabin pressure is decreasing rapidly.’

Alex pressed four green buttons, attempting to keep oxygen at a maximum  level, but it was futile. The air pressure was falling at an incredible rate. Alex’s only best chance was to reach his target destination before the wormhole collapses. The valves inside his suit were released via an AI feedback loop. It was enough to give him plenty of breathable oxygen, though for only a short period of time. The Falcon tossed and twirled, ricocheting like a bullet.

‘Warning! Structural integrity failure is imminent,’ said the computer.

The cockpit rattled and shuddered. Alex was bouncing from side-to-side, shaking violently. Even though he was wearing a helmet, the violent shaking was still enough to deliver a severe blow to the head if it struck against a hard surface.

‘Warning! Structural integrity failure is imminent.’

Steam jets pierced through walls inside the cockpit, hissing. Alex saw stars at the other end; the wormhole’s exit grew bigger. Big enough for the Falcon to escape, but with potentially disastrous consequences. Alex jolted, hitting his head against the wall. The violent blow rendered him unconscious. His spacecraft – out of control. Alex was left at the mercy of the volatile wormhole, determined to projectile his spacecraft out into a dangerous universe, possibly flying into a deadly target. An asteroid? A planet? The wormhole’s exit was drawing closer. Its gaping hole, closing. The Falcon was thrown out into space, and the wormhole imploded, sending out a shockwave. The spacecraft was being pushed out further, hurling toward a region of space unknown to humanity.

On-board the Falcon, an automatic distress signal began transmitting ... 

9 comments:

Liz said...

A good cliffhanger … just who or what might pick up that signal? BTW have you picked up the most recent research which suggests that in fact we’re the ones existing in a black hole?!!

Irena Szirtes said...

A good start to the story, and as Liz said, good to use a cliffhanger! Will email you with some minor adjustments to consider - and I mean consider, up to you to decide what you think about them! I look forward to reading more of Alex 's adventures.

Irena Szirtes said...

I'll deface the hard copy too! That will make it easier for you to decide 🙂

Anonymous said...

I liked this, and i don't usually like sci-fi. What i would say, is make it a bit more concise - I know from experience that an editor will pick up on the tiniest thing.
1. I don't really understand the first line - maybe its me being thick, but what was forming around the black hole?
2. Is the window in the cockpit the cockpit window, or is there another window?
3. I think I would put a colon between No ordinary journey and scientific experiment rather than a full stop as you are saying this is what it is.
4. I would put said through rather than said on the headphones.

There are a few other things , but I think Irene above has a few comments which may be the same as mine. I think you are a good story teller, which after all, is what it is all about!

Anonymous said...

Thank you for your feedback Liz. You will have to wait 'till I have written chapter two to find out who picks up the distress signal.

I already knew that we are the ones who exists inside the black. That is where the Fifth Dimension might exist. In fact, it has been depicted in a sci-fi movie I went to see in 2014. Michael Cain was in the same movie.

Adam

Anonymous said...

Thank your Irena. That will be very much appreciated.

Adam

Anonymous said...

Thank you for your feedback. It is most helpful.

There is only one window, and that is the same window inside the cockpit. What was forming around the black hole was the "lensing effect," which is when the black hole's gravity bends star-light around its circumference. To illustrate my point, if you hold up an empty glass in front of you, it causes objects to bend and stretch - hence the lensing effect. Essentially, a black hole acts like a lens on a telescope. I hope that I have explained it well enough for you.

Adam

Irena Szirtes said...

Wow! A way to convey that in the text would be great. I missed that because I was unaware of it. Go Adam!

Jennie said...

This is quite gripping Adam, I want to know what happens next. I have read that if you could emerge from a black hole you are likely to find yourself in another universe. Do you believe that?
I am a little confused - are you using the term black hole to mean the same as worm hole? In astronomy, the terms refer to 2 different concepts.
Look forward to part 2