High rise estate with no trees,
Family out of back to backs,
2p race and bingo nights
Concrete church.
I’m from
Not fitting in.
Steel pans, alsatians snapping,
All day Pentecostal singing,
Five family house with Minton hall,
Riots down the road.
I’m from
Spicy corner shop.
Victorian pool swimming with leaves,
Cycle to the fields to breathe,
Long lazy Sundays in
African time.
I’m from
Expelled kids making good,
Playing pool with disaffected youth,
Allotment packed with coriander,
Urban farm and music theatre,
All thrown in the pot together,
Chickens running loose.
I’m from
Young kids in red light houses,
Doped up rasta baby daddies,
Pack of dogs and our dead kitten,
Wary walks to school.
I’m from
Well-meaning white liberals,
Boys brigade march with trumpets;
Mosque and church
As good neighbours,
Rum-soaked cake.
I’m from
Let’s get stuck into building bridges
Carnivals and protest marches
Dad at home sewing dresses,
Billy Graham and Bishop Tutu rallies;
Police horse,
School girl flasher,
Planning my escape.
8 comments:
Thank you for sharing your poem on here Michelle. I get the overall impression that the poem is based on a city that you used to live. I am not going to guess which one though.
Adam
Great piece Michelle. Sounds like an eclectic upbringing! Love the ending
I thought there might be a word I hitherto didn't know for a poem with zero rhyming and the only thing signposted was the words FREE VERSE. So I liked your free verse and I hope it was written whilst a tiny but under the influence of a new emotional attachment and a glass of wine because the poem was quite raw which is symptomatic of the openness delivered of heartstrings and a tinge of stimulant.
No judgement here, just reading between lines really.
I'm curious about the one oddity: the police horse.
Love the use of selected detail to take us into each verse ššš
Love your free verse very emotive seems to leave me hanging fragmented don’t recognise it I am an outsider. Fiona
Thanks for publishing the "I'm From" meeting homework. There is SO much detail. I'd love to hear more about it!
Wonderful to hear you PERFORM this poem last night!! Poetry really is made to be heard aloud. š š š
So interesting to learn your life experiences Michelle in poetic form. Not so different to my own - I have written memoirs in the past.but not recently. Need to catch up. Life rushes by!
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