Saturday, 10 January 2026

Write a Pantoum (thanks to Michele)


Here’s a nice new year poem idea I found on substack: "Poetry Unbound"

Here's the substack reference:  https://open.substack.com/pub/poetryunbound

There’s a podcast link too: Poetry Unbound - sounds good.


A Pantoum (Malaysian form) about new year's eve night (or any nighttime)


Write eight lines and number them:

Where are you?

What's a night sound from outside you hear regularly?

What's a night sound from inside you hear regularly?

What can you see in the dark?

Who is nearby?

What's time doing?

What physical sensations can you feel when you wake at night?

What's one thing on your mind when you wake?


Arrange the lines in this order ( you can change them as you do this, when you see what emerges):

1 - 2- 3 -4

2 - 5- 4 -6

5 - 7 - 6 -8

7 - 3- 8- 1


Michele's ended up like this: ... READ IT TOMORROW!!!!!

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great exercise - thanks Michelle 👍

Jennie said...

An interesting idea Michelle. I may not do it before the meeting as I am on holiday but will go back to it. Thanks