Tuesday, 17 February 2026

One Night - a pantoum- by Fiona Carstairs

All Well? I stand ready at the door 

The sound of gaiety and laughter come in from the street

The dog softly growls and the cat is in 

The moon is full and the stars shine against the darkening sky 


The sound of gaiety and laughter come in from the street

My home is in darkness and the animals are quiet

The moon is full and the stars shine against the darkening sky 

I step into the street and join the throng


My home is in darkness and the animals are quiet

Coats and scarves thrown on keep us warm

I step into the street and join the throng

The night reaches out to encompass me as we walk 

 

Coats and scarves thrown on keep us warm

I need to return to my home -time stands still

The night reaches out to encompass me as we walk

I feel panic rising in my chest


I need to return to my home - time stands still

The dog softly growls and the cat is in 

I feel panic rising in my chest

All’s well! - I stand ready at the door

3 comments:

Jennie said...

I enjoyed your story Ann, it reminded me of your little dog Winnie and how good she was, I think she was a true folkie, loved the music! I guess you are still hankering after another one

Ann .R said...

Yes I very much am x

Ann .R said...

I think the above comments belong on the post below. This is a comment about the pantoum which I found very evocative and atmospheric.