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I like the way that this haiku draws the reader's attention to the shift from summer to autumn by describing plants that change at this time of year. Poetic and informative. The homework task has resulted in the blossoming of our haiku section!
It is interesting how autumn colours take over and in some ways are more spectacular than summer shades. The sumac tree has the most brilliant autumn colour hasn't it?
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Well, for some reason, my first comment wasn't saved, so I'll try again!
I like the way that this haiku draws the reader's attention to the shift from summer to autumn by describing plants that change at this time of year. Poetic and informative. The homework task has resulted in the blossoming of our haiku section!
Alex
A lovely haiku Sue - great picture too.
It is interesting how autumn colours take over and in some ways are more spectacular than summer shades. The sumac tree has the most brilliant autumn colour hasn't it?
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