| illustration: Delphine Jones |
Reflecting
on my distant past,
I lie and
stare through leaded glass.
I see a
vista – frowsy, worn,
And all at
once I’m lost and lorn.
I think of
how the ground once looked,
Its lawns
and hedges preened and plucked.
I dream of
trysts with handsome lords
Bedecked in
doublets, hose and swords.
Awoken from
my poignant thoughts,
I rise,
befuddled, out of sorts.
I grasp the
door and catch my breath.
I seek a
gown and start to dress.
Through
cobwebs spiders, dirt and grime,
I leave the
house and slowly climb
The mossy
steps t’ward broken walls
And old
forgotten waterfalls.
I stagger
tiredly through the grass
Aside
decaying, crumbling paths.
I picture
still, their faded grace
And feel a
tear upon my face.
I step
beneath a grove of trees,
Where fusty
smells imbue the breeze.
I spy a
craft that’s run aground
Beside a
lake of filthy brown.
I chance
upon my favourite seat,
But as I
sit it starts to creak.
It’s
overrun with weeds and vines
That strangle,
stifle and entwine.
I move away
with feeble tread,
Until I reach
a dingy shed.
Alone and
grave, I take a chair a
And wish my
life would finish there.
3 comments:
I remember this one well, Eliza; it has a nice rhythm to it, despite its sad ending. I particularly like "Where fusty smells imbue the breeze"; that has got to be one of my favourite lines ever! You certainly have a knack for language, to say the least, and we miss you at the group.
Alex
This poem if full of atmosphere Sarah, but a surprise at the end because I thought the writer was a ghost returning to wander through a deserted once-familiar place.
I found this a powerful piece of writing. Very evocative, and I like the end. Somehow a happy end would not have worked so well.Great descriptions of the abandoned garden.
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