Friday, 25 November 2022

The Forsaken Garden by Elizabeth Henry

illustration: Delphine Jones

Reflecting on my distant past,

I lie and stare through leaded glass.

I see a vista – frowsy, worn,

And all at once I’m lost and lorn.

 

I think of how the ground once looked,

Its lawns and hedges preened and plucked.

I dream of trysts with handsome lords

Bedecked in doublets, hose and swords.

 

Awoken from my poignant thoughts,

I rise, befuddled, out of sorts.

I grasp the door and catch my breath.

I seek a gown and start to dress.

 

Through cobwebs spiders, dirt and grime,

I leave the house and slowly climb

The mossy steps t’ward broken walls

And old forgotten waterfalls.

 

I stagger tiredly through the grass

Aside decaying, crumbling paths.

I picture still, their faded grace

And feel a tear upon my face.

 

I step beneath a grove of trees,

Where fusty smells imbue the breeze.

I spy a craft that’s run aground

Beside a lake of filthy brown.

 

I chance upon my favourite seat,

But as I sit it starts to creak.

It’s overrun with weeds and vines

That strangle, stifle and entwine.

 

I move away with feeble tread,

Until I reach a dingy shed.

Alone and grave, I take a chair a

And wish my life would finish there.

 

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I remember this one well, Eliza; it has a nice rhythm to it, despite its sad ending. I particularly like "Where fusty smells imbue the breeze"; that has got to be one of my favourite lines ever! You certainly have a knack for language, to say the least, and we miss you at the group.

Alex

Jennie said...

This poem if full of atmosphere Sarah, but a surprise at the end because I thought the writer was a ghost returning to wander through a deserted once-familiar place.

Irena Szirtes said...

I found this a powerful piece of writing. Very evocative, and I like the end. Somehow a happy end would not have worked so well.Great descriptions of the abandoned garden.